Thread:Iona's selector/@comment-27565452-20160121193706/@comment-9693174-20160124184202

Welp

Got around to reading this.

Gone for 2 days cuz of animethon p_p

Welp

Let's see recommendations.

1. Since the MC lacking muscles, should probably be a tactician. You probably already had this in mind, but to "improve" on the idea, he should come really close to a hair's thread and there should be other mages who would have done a better job than he did to make him go through a "dillemna" stage.

2. A lot of varaiaties of monsters. A lot. Key point for making... "jobs" for MC to take or something like that (gathering info)

3. If you're planning to add in minimal scenes of the magic school, might as well remove it as a whole. Would probably be redundant info.

For more, I need info for the plot :/