Thread:Iona's selector/@comment-27565452-20160121193706/@comment-9693174-20160121232905

First things forst: Don't think of spoilers here as spoilers. Again, if you hold back info from us, we can't feedback properly.

So looking at the details, it reminds me much of Unlimited Fafnir, except in the mage version.

Questions about the story: For the past... 8 (or so) years, how did the MC feel about the catastrophe? Because if it was such a long time ago that he doesn't feel anything about it anymore, you'll need to supply the MC with a new reason to go on fighting (which on it's own would be interesting), either that or the MC felt anger and annoyance for 8 years and gladly jumps into the battle the moment he knows he can, or he felt mad at himself for being weak and wonders whether he should join or not and bla bla bla.

So basically catastrophe was a ritual to summon a devil (fallen angel, the same thing) into the world failed horribly, right? Resulting in Inverses being summoned into the world. If yes, then did the government hide the existance of the inverse?

Does the MC have any connection with magecraft before the catastrophe? Like the dad being a mage or something?

I doubt it but would you implement in sci-fi into the story?

And more details about the MC in general.

To give recommendations from me: the catastrophe better have a backstory thought out (even if you don't plan to reveal it right away) to help you write the stuff.

... And then can't think of any more recommendations from the top of my head. Need more info. Just tell me everything :P

I suggest reading Unlimited Fafnir for this book. The concept is similar (welp, except for the fact that Fafnir is sci-fi) and it's an overall good book, should give you inspiration to write.